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I like to watch the sky to make the world seem smaller,
to shrink myself to a pinprick and cease, to stop existing for
a few moments at a time.  I like to feel the familiar ache
that is coming back to being, a lump in my throat,
a rush of adrenaline, the quick beating of a heart that, moments ago,
was not.
I like that gone to nothing sense, and then the quick return,
a rustle in the azalea bush, perhaps, or a gust of wind – the
here now present action that pulls me back from ghostly realms.
I like that sudden tug, the sharp twinge that is reality, the
anxious calling from myself –
I am here, I exist, I am alive.

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  • saretyuiop
    August 17, 2008
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    "Feel free" emotional ride, your poems are an escape from life.


  • Solidified
    August 13, 2008

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    I like the way you write and will always read your poems because you make me feel like I can escape from home lol.. okay now you see why I don't rhyme

    lol

    Again another one of yours which I really enjoyed.


    • writetheway
      August 13, 2008
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      Thank you! I'm going to read some more of your poems as soon as I have time -- it's crazy right now.


  • individuality gold member
    August 13, 2008
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