In darkness they slither
like serpents upon earth
Adorned like the sun
of the morning in fabulous
bouquets of craftiness
They lure gullible souls
of intrigue with partial
truth
Masking ancient sins in
realms of dishonesty
in a world prelude to reality
Existing in the sublime
of an alternate character
devised by inventions of folly
Subdued by images of fancy
awaiting cloning heads of
judgement to wit there doom
A contest entry
- Dazzle me by notorious.
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Comments
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Beautiful imagery, well expressed and laid out on a very apt background.
Well done.
Slayer -
well done
Flows very well. Creates a strong image. Excellent word choice.
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This is a lovely poem!
They lure gullible souls
of intrigue with partial
truth
i like this part though.
because it has so much menaing to me
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Existing in the sublime
of an alternate character
devised by inventions of folly
I just love that part.
sounds like online play between
several devious persons.
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gullabe==>gullible. Use spell check.
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