heart beat quickening
matching the pace of the game
one thought travelling
win the game, fulfil my dream
touched by the light of the sun
Author notes
This is the first Tanka poem I have ever written, giggles, hope it is ok 
Summer Olympics was the prompt and the photo shown on the contest page of a team event.
A contest entry
- Summer Games Tanka Quickie PIF by carole21.
850 points, ended August 20, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a very nice write for your first tanka . . don't forget the spell check & pull down . . thanks for the contest entry
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Thanks Carole
what do you mean by the pull down?
Hugs
Cherry/Jill xxx
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