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Beckoned Ascent

Exhaling,

tears streamed...



like crystal chariots...



carting once known life away



trumpets blared...






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Author notes

Prompt~ Picture Prompt (15 words)

Picture Credit: visualparadox.com

A contest entry

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  • Angelflower
    August 21, 2008

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    You did such a wonderful job with this picture!! I really love it!! it's soft and just fittting for it.. congrats on the Bronze!! well Deserved!!


    Angel


  • daviscth silver member
    August 17, 2008
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    You did a great job with the prompt. Congrats on the bronze.


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    A beauty as usual Congrats on the bronze!

    "Trumpets blared, I asceded"

    Amber


  • Desire gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Beckoned Ascent
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words:crystal chariots- for some reason was shown Pegasus- and I'm being shown an open book- reference to 'The Good Book' and reference to: Marker- placed in Jezebiel- Now this is quite interesting for as I read again- I was being shown a hand - as if telling me - no no- waving no no- like don't go there- and again being shown emphasis on *crystal chariots* and wild as this may sound- getting phrase: Pimp My Ride-
    Now whether energy being sarcastic or not- I was getting that phrase- and shown the wheels on the chariot- This is very interesting- I'm being shown the chariot like a low rider so to speak- the hydraulics- whether meant as a joke or referencing You having a great sense of humor- I am nudged to pass that on- and also getting reference to: Keys to the Kingdom
    and seeing like *The Price is Right* behind curtain number 7:31-*Mark* my words Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Magnificent images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • z etoile
    August 15, 2008

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    beautiful poem for so little words. Great job on this piece very effective keep writing.

    MJ


  • Fourthaxis
    August 12, 2008

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    "tears streamed like crystal chariots"
    what a beautiful thought!
    Beautiful poem! Well penned!
    Best wishes!


  • no longer a member
    August 12, 2008
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    I ascended....
    Nice Nice Nice.
    I enjoyed this.

    ~Bramble

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