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truly beautiful

What is beauty that resides in one's heart
for i am certain its not one's face
nor its shadow of clothing or accessories
its is the moments that you give in ones memory

the true beauty i seek is not of materialise
where material says what beauty shades
beauty is that holds my heart to one lace
a persona which colour my moments with a simple heart
by just being with one i find serenity with no haste
where i be myself with one and nothing feels fake

What is true beauty that reside in one's heart
for certain its not one's face
it's the moment you shade in one's memory
it's the warmth that cradles through one's heart
it's the feeling of being acknowledged by one's smile
it's the innocence that bides in one's thoughts

for this i say you are the one of its kind
you  are truly beautiful even when you cry
you are truly beautiful even your smile

don't burden your soul by an image

a mirror shows you your skin in rays of light
your beauty shines even in darkness of one's closed sight..






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  • Mehra Sultan
    November 9

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    wow

    I simply loved it...very nice...if only i could give you more applause:s


  • crazymomma
    August 19, 2008

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    I really enjoyed the metaphores and imagery in this write. I especially liked the ending. "a mirror shows you your skin in rays of light
    your beauty shines even in darkness of one's closed eye." I think the world might be a better place if everyone were blind. Thanks for entering and good luck.


    • abuyi
      August 19, 2008
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      thanks a lot for the green.. i hope your ap daughter feels much better and beautiful.