Spectrum shields thrown
carelessly over shoulders,
trekking through the snow
It crunches beneath her feet...
Author notes
Picture A
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXXV - by Desire.
700 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love him ♥
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Trekking Through The Snow
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: Spectrum shields thrown- very interesting for I kept getting phrase: curious- like how Alice referred to in Wonderland- after reading again- I was seeing images from High School Musical and seeing the curly haired actor- and shown a notebook- also word: diary- seeing a lock also key- but then a shift over to a scene in Butterfly Effect- where Ashton is underneath the bed- but seeing him scribbling frantically- Now this may sound strange but being shown a butterfly tattoo of sorts- looks like on abdomen area Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Magnificent images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Nice write, crisp like snow, and succinct.
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I like that word... "succinct". I forgot about it lol ^_^
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