Dusty silver sadness
rinsed in rain;
still
she danced and sang
of tomorrow.
Contemplating rainbows.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXXV - by Desire.
700 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on the silver. I enjoyed this very much.
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Beautiful write!
"contemplating rainbows" - my favorite line
Congrats on the silver dear 
Amber
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Into Tomorrow
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: Dusty silver sadness- Now this is quite interesting for after reading Your verse- kept getting images of Billy Holiday- also got a brief glimpse of Marilyn Monroe- and reference to: Some Like It Hot- and name: Norma Jean- I'm also being shown a scroll- rolled up and sealed- reference to 7- and phrase: Mighty sword- also getting phrase: Meager at best- however that is to be interpreted- I'm being shown the sky and clouds moving like in fast motion- with the Light filtering through Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Magnificent images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Sounds like you took a peek into my spirit and revealed it to the world. This is sadly beautiful, with a dash of hope to wrap it all up.
Beautiful! I wish you well in the challenge.
Always ♥
Renee
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Pollana? I don't think so.
I have a healthy respect for those who can keep hope when things are tarnished and dirty...call it faith or courage. Perhaps the dance is what keeps her strenth and takes joy where it can be found.
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