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Look Up

Missing image
My Rainbow
Will Always Be Here
To Out-Shadow The Loneliness
He Left For You...

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15 words - I love this picture

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Look Up
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: Out- Shadow The Loneliness- now this may sound strange but shown like two stones struck together as if to make fire through friction- and getting reference to: Opposites Attract- Silly as this may sound but after reading again- got words: Fruit of the Looms- and shown the Apple guy-also the commercials with him singing- for some reason emphasis on tagless shirts-briefs and how it is an ink tag compared to the sewn on ones...Also reference to toilet sit left up- and (he gotta go) Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    **Please credit Photobucket in the AC- Thankies so much
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Magnificent images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~



    • OnceUponAMind silver member
      August 17, 2008

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      Dear, that made perfect sense! Thank you for deeply looking into it, and for the HM

      Much Love, Amber


      • Desire gold member
        August 19, 2008
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        and You are more than Welcome
        I'm Honored You took the time to pen~
        Yay!!! Congratulations!! Woot

  • anatomy
    August 15, 2008

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    Beautiful in such a small amount of words. Thank you for commenting on my poem recently.


  • crimsondew
    August 13, 2008

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    Awww...How lovely is this!

    All the bets in the contset dear


  • Fourthaxis
    August 12, 2008

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    Beautiful thought in 15 words! I loved the picture too!
    Best wishes!



    ps: it should be loneliness!


  • retribusive
    August 12, 2008

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    I loved the picture as well... but too much spun through my head and too fast to write anything down that would be logical.

    You did very well with it!

    Best of luck in the contest.

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