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Avoiding Life




Air bubbles trap
the innocent; untroubled,
for a life away from life.





                                        Float towards me.










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Picture C: visualparadox.com
15 words

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • Desire gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Avoiding Life
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: life far away from life- Nowwwwwwww while reading- kept getting this word: Prison- whether metaphor or symbolism- but also given word: Darvocet and then being shown this pink pill- oval- also getting reference to 30milligrams for some odd reason and -of what appears to be hexagon shaped pill- looks like it has a blue hue to it- I'm seeing fingers sort on counter- like in a pharmacy; reference to overdose- and word: avoidance Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Magnificent images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~