I have flown
above rainbows
on white days
and painted the sky
with colorful dreams
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXXV - by Desire.
700 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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...life is good!
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Congratulations on the gold! It just occured to me that my nighttime dreams are in black and white but my daydreams are in vibrant, living color as are you words.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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A wonderful choice for the gold!! Congratulations!
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Beautiful write
Very much deserving of Gold! Congrats 
Amber
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Life Savior
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: painted the sky- quite interesting for while I was reading- kept being shown what appears to be rain- but reference to color of Skittles- and I was being shown words: break up- and word: friend- also seeing a palette- with 6 colors- reference to number 6- also was getting word: June-Now also was getting words: Emancipation Proclamation for some reason Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
**Please credit Photobucket in the AC- Thankies so much
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Magnificent images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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And I have seen these dreams... O, the magnificent array you have splayed for this world, in your words. You have left an impression in many minds. There are no colors as beautiful as those by God's hands when He uses you as an instrument like the painter's brush.
MUAH. Write on, my sweet turkey sister. One.
Dez
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What a beautiful concept you've derived from the photo. I love the beauty you brought out in your words.
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This is very nice, I love it. I thought it was longer than I clicked, now i see that it is no more tnan 15 words. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing, have a bless one
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