Boy, was I surprised
to know that you bore twins,
no wonder your husband feigned
a smile when I met him!
You poor thing, to bear such plight
will need twice the attention and resolve,
to take care of two young tykes
your fragile bones will soon dissolve,
I shall fervently pray for your good health
and that of your babies' too,
I am sure it is going to be tough
to watch your home turn into a zoo,
I write 'best of luck' my dear friend
for I doubt we will now get to meet,
after all with two rambunctious twins
you'll be incapable of carrying out this feat!
Author notes
Greeting card with a difference.
A contest entry
- Care Enough To Write The Very Best by NotAMolly.
800 points, ended August 20, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Don't ask me what I meant by this!
Comments
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This poem is very silly haha >.< I can only imagine your friend's troubles with twins! My aunt has twins lol
"Boy, was I surprised
to know that you bore twins,
no wonder your husband feigned
a smile when I met him!"
lol This reminds me of my uncle's reaction when my aunt found out she was having twins. He just went, "ewwww Twins are creepy." lmao Great write. It made me smile. :]
-Lily♥
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Hey, she'll need your help, oh friendly babysitter/ godparent! Mwwahaha! Don't you go writing your friend off cause they have kids! Good job, and thanks for entering.
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LOL! None of my friends have given birth to twins as of yet but when they do, rest assured I just might send this poem......for quirks, if nothing else!!
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