Divine reflections in forgotten mirrors;
pasts and pasts away
like lands of distant memories in the hands
of silver refractions.
Slipping into nostalgic patterns on
shores dotted with shells and flowers,
bleeding replicas of antiquity design
pulling me back to relive them like
the ebbing waves I so vividly remember...
Take me to the ocean
Author notes
http://littlemewhatever.deviantart.com/art/Ocean-Mirror-91456686
^prompt
I used to live by the sea, and I miss it dearly. :[
A contest entry
- Quickie. Because I Feel Like It! by xCandieKissesx.
470 points, ended August 13, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Oh my goodness, this is just amazing.
Good luck (like you need it.
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Smooth!
That's funny, I used the word nostalgic too. It must be one of those days.
The picture is pretty. The poem is calming, beautiful, & brings up feelings of tranquility. Love your phrasing.
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Woah!
So powerful and filled with beauty. I wish I lived by the ocean! Instead, I live by a river. But it's just not the same! :[ Hahahh. Exquisite job and good luck!
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Prompt!
Here's your prompt! You have 1 more chance to change it if you'd like! Good luck!
http://littlemewhatever.deviantart.com/art/Ocean-Mirror-91456686
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