I perceive,
observe things
both new and old
I listen to
sounds and song
I inhale,
taste life
I am touched
I sense
I write.
A contest entry
- Help me believe! by BellaD.
850 points, ended August 24, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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This is a very nice poem indeed as always you did a wonderful job thanks for sharing goodluck in the contest much love always
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Sparsely elegant and powerful. A fine poem. Thank you for your entry.
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YOU DO,
BRILLIANTLY
IT SHOWS
VERY LOVELY
GOD BLESS...

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Thank you, my friend
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A very meaningful poem with senses gathering the fruits of experience and mind so elegantly sharing them articulated through writing

I Like the thoughtful intentions underlyingt this piece


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