Love is like the ocean, hard to navigate and yet so worth it!
A contest entry
- Sentence by crivanea.
300 points, ended August 21, 2008, 32 entries
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I hope this isn't horribly bad, is it?
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This metaphor is brilliant. I just ran on storm too many times.
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lol.. BEAUTIFUL... yet short AND! so true!...
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So true
Short and Sweet lol the best!!
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lol!! it used to be hard to navigate.now u got maps and planes..and hey..all ocean is eventually the same..all the same water..and u'll hit land eventually..lol
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Lol I know its supposed to be a sentence of hope ^^
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I totally agree with that line
Although I think I'm more scared to navigate the ocean than love though lol
Good luck with your entry
Claire x -
truely spoken =) love you like my brother, hopefully talk to you sometime soon.
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