just enough time
to undress my vixen,
skirt hiked on the dance floor
she will sit on the flat of my palm
fingers amid soft ravines
says no to nothing
just writhes against them
gone in the eyes
and lets you hold all of her
and you are gonna need to count
backwards from 20, mister
breathe deep and slow down
if you want to last
more than 12 lines
with my girl...
A contest entry
- Now You Make Me Blush, Won gold in comp from Penman and am passing it on, winner please PIF 300 points by Topaze.
450 points, ended August 12, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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:)))))))
so cuteeeeeee...and well written! hmmmmm...i am speechless
well done my friend 
juliet
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Congrats on the bronze.
nicely done here.
Riftkin
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Good imagination or was this a true account? Nice... congratulations on your win!
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just my imagination im afraid
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A wonderful write, thank you for your fine entry in this contest
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