Why do you say I mean so much to you?
You say that everything I want to do,
Or say, is going to show the earth
What I am truly worth.
I’m only a person so small,
And they have put up their walls.
They don't even hear what I say,
you tell me you do, everyday.
You keep saying that if I were to die,
You’d jump into my coffin and lie
Beside me.
Author notes
You may be only one person in the world, but you may also be the world to one person.
A contest entry
- Quote Prompt by Redeemed15.
425 points, ended August 18, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice good write
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this is a nice write.....i like it...although it seemed that your words could have flowed a little bit more....but otherwise its really good
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Nice write. Best of luck in the contest. This is a really nice piece. Was it written to someone in specific? I also like the Author Notes.
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But you say that if I were to die
You’d jump into my coffin and lie
Beside me.
i LOVE those lines,
they are so sweet.
but I feel like the rest of the rhyming is kind of forced.
just my opinion
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Great poem. I love the lines:
But you say that if I were to die
You'd jump into my coffin and lie
beside me
Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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i love thos poem, i hope you get something for it... love....
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