you said your goodbyes,
and mine werent ready yet.
the race out of my life begins here.
get ready, get set.
GO!
Get out of here!
i dont want you anymore!
before you leave,
I have a gift.
i pull out a knife,
with my cigerette lit.
your screams travels miles,
yet no one can here.
i guess before we were together,
you should have checked my carrer.
i kill people for revenge.
hey, thats what i do. =/
you give one last plead,
i reply "Haha you're screwed."
i give off my twisted smile,
and give one last glare.
The flash off my sword,
gleams the blue in my hair.
I rip out your heart,
sew it to my wrist.
ist a shame,
you'll realy be missed. =[
but now your gone and i can live.
get ready, get set...
GO!
get away from me.
A contest entry
- SO WHAT?! I don't want you tonight! by StarvingAuthor.
324 points, ended October 22, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Rhyming Break up Prewrites :] by Ami.
510 points, ended July 30, 55 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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what do you think?
Comments
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Wow this was fucking Awesome Dark write for the win
Not what I expected only one thing I noticed
"you siad your goodbyes," should be "you said your goodbyes,"
One little typo nothing big Still loved the write
Thanks for entering and good luck
-♥Amy♥ -
wow.
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this is a girl that knows how to have a good time.
If I see you walking on my side of the street, I'm heading over to the other side. You express the 'dark' very well. I hope you continue to expand and try the 'dark contests' here. They are a lot of fun. P.S. A good knife fight can do much to alleviate the boredom of the day!
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this is kinda scary...good poem, but freaky.
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