I will sit right here forever
in case there is a need
And rise to the occasion
with sincerity and speed
Right by your side I'll always be
no matter what comes this way
Through good or bad I promise you
right by your side I'll stay
Whether sickness or in health
not even death can make us part
Our bond is just too powerful
and was right from the start
I know what is deep inside
and the goodness that is there
It reaches out to me
with so much love to share
So by your side I'll be
just like I've been before
And here is where I'll stay
for now and evermore
In a list
A contest entry
- Your Best Three Pre-writes by piccola.
800 points, ended November 27, 2008, 140 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be courteous and comment..NO rude or critical critiques please.
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this is beautiful from beginning to end. i love the sentiment, and everything about it. The border and colors fit the write perfectly. rhyme and flow are nearly perfect too. Great job here.
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This is so lovely, it could act as a wedding vow. Have to agree that the presentation is lovely. Perfectly poised and wonderfully written
Petal~
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first of all the rhyme and flow are great. Next the presentation is wonderful. It fits the poem like a hand in a glove. It's a beautiful sentiment.
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Oh Wow!! This is just quite simply beautiful!!! I just love the warm hearted imagery and the background is so perfect with it.
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Oh! The bounty of love flowing from this piece just warms my heart and brought forth an honest soft smile from my lips which has been hard as of late
A true delight to read and view with the delightful background
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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I cannot read this without doing the girlie panda eye number hunyou got such a beautiful love to hold within your hearts one that seldom comes along but when it does the power it generates reflects in a glow circling the earth. Beautiful hun. You share your love but we know who holds your heart.
Absolutely brilliant post ...way to go my good bad girl. All my blessings to both of you hun.I have been touched by you both and this love you hold.
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ah smoooooooooooooshy i am done with love just give me the blood and guts movies i find them very relaxing
love you rev papa -
oh sis this is so butiful
xxx Judie xxx
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Precious~
Now this is one Gorgeous piece You have penned Jeannie
The border compliments Your words
Woot!!
Tight rhyme and Powerful message also
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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beautiful!
You words express, so well, your undying, and unconditional love for him. I love the rhyming you have used here, and the border is just precious!
Write on my friend!
Jeannette
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beautiful!
You words express, so well, your undying, and unconditional love for him. I love the rhyming you have used here, and the border is just precious!
Write on my friend!
Jeannette
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