Two beings fell in love...
One a dark angel
The other a human.
She wore a short red dress,
And he only had wings.
Her black hair billowed around her face,
While his arms held her close to him.
One day she almost died.
He couldn't do anything,
But he picked her up
And folded his wings around her.
"I couldn't live without you,"
Was what he said to her.
"So please keep breathing."
He pleaded for hours.
He decided she was gone,
So he gave her one last kiss.
As he was walking away,
He heard his name.
It was spoken by an angel's voice,
But came only from his lover's tongue.
Author notes
Well, this is an interesting one.. I hope it's okay at least. I like the last part the best because it rolls nicely. 
I hope it's what you needed, but if there are any suggestions, please let me know! 
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How do you like it? Let me know if there's anything to fix!
Comments
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this was a really interesting and sweet poem.. the flow seemed like it needed a little work but the imagery was vivid and detailed! bravo! I really liked it! thank you very much for sharing!!Best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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Very nicely done. The story is there and well versed.
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this is very beautiful. i love it. i have an image in my head. it will always be there.
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