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I Am

I am not perfect, but I am me.
Maybe I mess up now and then,
But I am all that I need to be.

I am not an angel on earth.
I'm just a real live girl,
But I still know what I'm worth.

I am not all I want to be yet.
There's still a lot I want to learn,
But I'll take all of life I can get.

A contest entry

God Bless You!

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  • astralshepherd gold member
    August 13, 2008

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    a lovely poem and a worthy entry into the contest, nice rhyme and the simple statement of who you are is refreshing.

    blessings and best wishes,


  • carl dunford
    August 12, 2008
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    No body is perfect, but your poem is, good luck in the contest, and thanks for your comments, Carl.


  • BellaD
    August 12, 2008

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    This is so sweet and endearing. I love simply stated verse such as this--so accessible yet carrying great depth of feeling. Thank you for this inspiring piece.