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Ditch the angst it does not belong
You are young enough to believe, sing a happier song
We can not cure the world of all ills over night
but with strength of purpose we will put up a fight.

Believing in something other than hate,
is the way to go forwards not remonstrate,
A closed heart has no feelings except those unkind
despite all the dreaming it starts in the mind.

Each day you are breathing is one day closer to last,
Live for the future but don't forget all the past,
The ones who have hurt are judged in due course
The innocent only shall feel no remorse. 

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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    November 17

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    ""Each day you are breathing is one day closer to last,
    Live for the future but don't forget all the past,
    The ones who have hurt are judged in due course
    The innocent only shall feel no remorse.""

    Very true.This poem should not be taken as Just a comment.

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  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    August 7
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    I really like this and am glad I came across it

    "A closed heart has no feelings"

    Beautiful write of hope!


  • Tzipora
    June 21
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    Live for the future but don't forget all the past,

    i like ....


  • liltulip gold member
    May 19

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    love this

    your words are dear and the message is important, but will the young read it and hear, or scoff....this is lovely....


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 4, 2008
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    "A closed heart has no feelings except those unkind" very true

    good job


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 13, 2008

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    awww this is wonderful i really enjoyed this, and it has a great flow, take care and kep writting
    Stephanie ♥

  • chedderhead
    August 12, 2008
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    a closed heart has no feelings except those unkind. great job

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