I am burning on its rays
My body is melting as you gaze
How long will it take
To make my body totally break
im not afraid ill dissappear
on this world to vanished forever
how i wish youll never forget
my beauty before this sun would set
what is a good day everynoon?
if that moment would be my doom
i am the goddess of the sun
but soon i know ill be gone.
A contest entry
- Delightful Art Inspired #2 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended August 29, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very unique take on the prompt.The imagery and word usage is very good.A wonderful edition to the contest.Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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So sad yet beautiful too at the same times, simple and from the heart as always
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good stuff.
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nicely written. <3333
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