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just another fuck

He shows up at the door with condom in hand

The darkness brings out a wild side, no longer shy

Whispers of affection, eyes looking the other way

Hair pulling, scratching, sucking, biting, smacking, licking- his dirty whore tonight

Out the window he goes, all thats left is cigarette butts and the scent of sex

Blow out the candles, back into bed to sleep in a layer of guilt

Clothes scattered on the floor, remnants of last nights fuck

The sheets are stained and torn, pillow is drenched with sweat

Body is covered in bruises and the smell of brutal romance

Sore from the waist down, thrown around the mattress like a rag doll

Hot shower soothes, washing the saliva and cum from dirty skin

Innocence lost, youth gone

Love can never be obtained this way

Destined to be just a booty call, another stupid slut, a simple fuck, an easy screw…longing to be more

A contest entry

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    January 15

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    very passionate in its emotional delivery
    and strong and detailed in its imagery
    i am sorry you were someone's "booty call" because that's uncalled for

    but you did pen this well
    and i thank you for sharing this with us

  • MusicOfTheNight79
    September 9, 2008

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    So I must say the title of this poem is what caught my eye. Its never easy with the guy who just wants to get in your pants...especially if you like him. Guys never see that girls really have feelings behind what they see as just a fuck. It isn't fair but it's true. I love the poem and I'm sorry you had to go through that. I think the last 3 lines were my favorites!


    • Lonely Christina
      September 11, 2008
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      yea im sure it did lol and ya u got tht right... thanks 4 the comment! and its ok..me and the guy worked it out...glad u liked!


  • UnHoLy-VeNgEaNcE
    September 5, 2008
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    oh my gosh i love this its amazing

    synnlee<3


  • whisper my name
    September 4, 2008
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    lol cutie.. thats a awesome word to be called


  • whisper my name
    September 4, 2008

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    i rate this a uhhhh * tries to put all fingers and toes up* that many lol. no but seriously that was awesome and to be honest some guys are like that.. others arent so bad like myself


  • edit my world.
    August 24, 2008

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    ha, well this is awesome espcially since when i read this i swore the person writing it was much much older. and since you arent but a year younger than me. that just makes me like it so much more. thankies for entering hun.

    Dani♥


  • The Drifter
    August 22, 2008

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    just another fuck

    Yes innocense lost to one not deserving but you will know beter next time--take you time and be very picky for it can be such a beautiful time in your life.
    Well sritten and flows very well--Thank you for the good read--yo painted a picture for all up reminding us of what we all went through.
    bw


    • Lonely Christina
      August 22, 2008
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      oh lol no i lost my virginity @ 13 and i am now 15, i allready kno better even tho this just happened. thanks 4 the comment


  • XBrittniX
    August 14, 2008

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    thius is kick asss..
    wait someone left a comment saying he has a version?? does he is so snd me the link
    peace


  • lianna27
    August 13, 2008

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    nice! i like it great job! i think it makes it alot better than it wld of been since you added so much detail..but it still wlda been great! great job
    -lindsay
    xoxo


  • peridotPixi
    August 13, 2008

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    nice poem, i like its a little graphic but thats allright, im off to read his verison now, keep up the writing, ~Amy

  • EmoBunny
    August 12, 2008
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    l luved it xD good write

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