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Cliff Notes.

 

Tattooed by time,
crooked lines weave
daily reminders
of follies endured.

A compound, compressed
skull fracture winds
a 7 inch jagged track,
under 14 inches of hair.

Abdominal scars obliterate
what was once a naval,
leaving only an asterick.

A burn mark stretches
like a caterpillar,
across my forearm,
its pale white squiggle,
stark against tanned flesh.

Scars are the
cliff notes of our lives,
abbreviated lines that
bookmark the rendering
of our very mortality.

Like a bad tattoo
unerasable and haunting
they remain until
we are remains,
only then does time remove
all traces of what was
an imperfect blemish
long past oblivion.

 

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  • trulymadlydeeply
    August 12, 2008

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    I think I'd rather use markers than a tattoo. This way you get to erase what no longer works for you. You can't remove the scars but in time some of them disappear until even you yourself has to really look for it. And the rest, well..... lots of love helps those become a memory also.And if that doesn't help, well then sit in a field of tulips and blow bubbles and let the universe entertain you.
    well written and thought provoking. Good luck in the contest.
    tmd


  • Memories Die silver member
    August 12, 2008
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    I like this. Scars remind us of where we've been. Very nice take on them.


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    August 12, 2008

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    This was an unusual topic and I loved the direction that you took. I took a header skiing a couple of winters ago and, although I am not charmed by the scar on my forehead, I look at it fondly because it reminds me of the fun we had and the chances I took. Each of our marks represent the highs and lows of our existence and brand us for the unique individuals that we are. Peace, Liz


  • no longer a member
    August 12, 2008

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    "abbreviated lines that bookmark the rendering of our mortality."

    Indeed they are. I liked this very much. Thank you. ~Bramble