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The Initiation

The sins of all evil cast into a sphere,

causing a once vibrantly crimson entity

to be tainted raven.

 

Inks of maliciousness spew forth, polluting her heart with despair.

Ivory tapestries provide a pallet of negativity's aura to draw a tale of deception,

for her to bare etched through layers, patented generically immoral.

 

Her eyes pits of coal, unfeeling,

once emerald pools of  innocence & simplicity,

touched malevolently by the transgressions,

of a dark society. 

 

 

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  • Angelflower
    August 13, 2008
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    I really like this.. it's unique and yet expressed very simply.. And yet it's intense as well.. Society likes to corrupt the innocent even when it doesn't mean too.. I really like the message in this piece.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • no longer a member
    August 12, 2008

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    Negativity's aura drawing a tale of deception - I like that.

    I enjoyed this. Thank you. ~Bramble