Just a piece of your heart on your sleeve I can find.
A few minute sounds stopped by a stammering tongue!
I desired to converse with your heart and mind;
with the person who sits behind those eyes watching.
If I could lay down within the scape of your mind,
harmonise and meditate on all your thought's ways,
only then perhaps could I find all the right words,
only then you would listen to all I would say?
But I wait far on the outside,
my intentions reflected by
those eyes hiding you deep inside -
keeping you 'civilised' and 'pure'.
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A contest entry
- Unrequited emotions. by Lights Sorrow.
600 points, ended August 26, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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I like this...I don't know I can't think of anything to say but Wow!
I love how you express your thoughts clearly
I desired to converse with your heart and mind;
with the person who sits behind those eyes watching.
I love this part...
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Nice.
I like this, it's very deep in thought. It kinda calms the mind a bit after reading it too, keep up on the great work.
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