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War of love

Fighting a war of love.
Sharing a heart with another only to find it broken.
Tired of living a life unheard by the world.

Point that gun at me.
pull that trigger.
Let me feel something...

Rather feel pain then live without love.
Tears falling like rain.
Screams of pain

Screams of pain...
I'v done that for you.

Screams of pain...
thats all anyone does because of you.

Point that gun at me.
pull that trigger.
Let me feel something...

Cant keep living.
Not like this with you...
Just please kill me now.

What life I once had...
I have no more.
no more.
Thanks to you.

Shattered like glass.
My heart

Screams of pain.
all because of you

Theres got to be a reason.
I continue to repeat that.
Theres got to be a reason.

You dont need a reason do you?
Do you ever have one?

Point that gun at me.
pull that trigger.
Let me feel something...

I fall to my knees.
Tears fall like rain.
Screams of pain.

Heartbreak is what you know most...
Do you even ever care?

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  • AlmostLover
    August 12, 2008

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    Wow, this is really emotional. You just completly opened up. The flow of this poem could use a teeny bit of work but other than that its really great!