shattered mirror
echos broken memories
tying branches hiding
weeping, laughing fenced
Author notes
all words are from word bank
A contest entry
- Rictameter Word Bank by piccola.
900 points, ended August 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is not in the form of a rictameter. could you please make sure it is if you want to be considered for a trophy. thank you
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you did do a wonderful job.
aboomer said al of what I was thinking.

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Lovely images with those words! Short, but great depth and imagery!
best wishes in your contest




