Is this what love is-
A calm, wonderful peace?
Or when your away from me..
will it bring me grielf?
I want to be in your arms,
held tight again.
Feeling the warmth of your skin-
Soft, silky pleasures.
Being in love-
Is it different from things we all kknow?
Cont explain the wonderful feelings,
inside of me.
It hurts,
But yet it's great
For some they may wait.
But i choose now to
love you forever.
I feel hurt,
I feel empty.
Don't know what to do.
I want to cry-
But I can't:
I'm missing you.
A contest entry
- Love II by blaq roze.
1000 points, ended August 20, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
about my bf and how I feel without him near me.
Comments
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j
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good job
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"Is it different from things we all kknow?
Cont explain the wonderful feelings..."
few typos and forgot to capitalize an I somewhere else. but besides that i loved it!!!
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