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behind raspberry splotches



Behind raspberry splotches she spent her teenage years
hidden from the world beneath god’s bad humour

with inner defiance she took a stance
in anticipation of the day she could say aloud
despite her flaws and the ugly words her skin spoke

I am beautiful

Author notes

Poem written from the contest quote

"...you still have to find the strength to say in words, what you would normally say on your skin.”

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 26, 2008

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    This is utterly beautiful; In just 6 lines you have expressed yourself well and creatively

    Wonderful poem
    Best of luck!

    Stay safe
    ~Manda