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F- freeking amazing

F- FREEKING AMAZING
U- UNBELIEVABLE
C- CRAZY
K- KISSING EVERYWHERE
I- INCREDIBLE FEELING
N- NOTHING COMPARES
G- GREAT..GREAT..GREAT!

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FUCKING
Written January 13th, 2004

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  • Breeze
    February 7, 2004
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    You're 15, you should be up a tree or something! Urgh, I must cleanse my mind. (reply?)

    what in the fuck is that supposed to mean?

  • WutheringWildly
    February 7, 2004
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    You're 15, you should be up a tree or something! Urgh, I must cleanse my mind.


  • February 6, 2004
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    LoL. Good poem captures the repeated urgency in the feeling.

  • Night0wI
    January 31, 2004
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    haha that is so cute...... personally i am more into that erotic horror where you bleed and scream.....huh........comments?


  • January 19, 2004
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    ok

    OK? It was alright but you could have got into more details

  • Vibrato
    January 17, 2004
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    My balls dropped when I read this. I think you've actually helped me past puberty.

  • WutheringWildly
    January 17, 2004
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    Haha.

    I laughed my pants off. In Scotland, those are not trousers. I quickly pulled them back up.

  • infestedwater
    January 14, 2004
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    i didnt enjoy this poem at all, i agree that you could do much better...

  • CrAzyDrPePPeR26
    January 14, 2004
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    Well, I R- Really E- Examined A- All L- LINES L- LAUGING Y- YES, it sucks. I didnt like that poem at all and I am sure that you are capable of better work. Oh well, just my opinion!


  • darell
    January 14, 2004
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    Okay! LOL! I get your point. I believe i was alot less crude and a
    little more creative but still in all "I was inspired!" You get kool points for this one. Orgasm!!!

  • goldenchile
    January 14, 2004
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    well. well. you captured sex well... for a young'un, didnt' realize how old u were. i guess the kids are startin earlier and earlier these days. viva la acrostic poems! . hey, it's ur thing.
    Edited on Jan 15, 1:14 p.m. because 'new knowledge'.


  • foxykitten
    January 14, 2004
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    hehehe this is cute

  • bobomite
    January 14, 2004
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    lol. nice poem. thats kinda what i wanna do right now.lol. good write.

    The Humored Bobert


  • freedomnessa
    January 13, 2004
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    Great

    The wording is great... i love the rythym

  • Flagrancy
    January 13, 2004
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    Randomly crazy

    uhhhhhhh LOL

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