The windmills of time plays games..
Each drifting instant leaving memories of mixed meanings and reasons..
Some cherishing, lively moments to bring a smile in the hardest times..
While some wreaking tears in the hopeful eyes..
I wonder if each new day could bring cheers and laughter..
Instead of drowning each day in waves of sadness and misery..
If only each day would promise a new happy story..
Instead of broken vows and convincing lies..
If only each day would ignite a bright, lively feeling
Instead of giving birth to sorrows and grief..
If only each day the emotions of love become more pure..
Instead of drenching in fakeness and false promises..
And finally if only one day all these wishes of mine would come true..
That I guess time will tell..
Author notes
m feeling upbeat rite now.. so juss wishing if each coming moment would remain this way.
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umz. Great to acieve Gold Cup, congratulations.
Wow. mujai tu abhi tuk nahi mila
well, poem was really wonderful
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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you deserve a gold cup!!! congratulations Aisha! your name is similar to mine hehehe... keep up the good work,i like this one.
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I like this enough to give you a gold cup.
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"The windmills of time plays games.." windmill plays or windmills play
"Each drifting instant leaving memories of mixed meanings and reasons.." i love this line
"If only each day would promise a new happy story..Instead of broken vows and convincing lies.." ooh dont i know it lol great job
great poem good luck in the contest
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A very thoughtful piece and wishful, too. I like the juxtaposition of good and bad things in each of the lines, it makes comparison easy. I think you have a definite flair for words and poetry, you need a little polishing but that comes with practice and also reading your dictionary to learn more words and becoming adept at spelling.
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Very nice journey through time you provided for everyone here...it is also an educational...beatiful imagery...i really enjoyed it...thank you for sharing your thoughts...all the best..
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dear aisha,
this poem highlights the points about life and future.
its a good poem.
and yes.....later on the time will tell..
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welcome to all poetry
Hi aisha
I hope you find all the happiness life has to offer
everyone deserves to be happy Good poem please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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