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Life With (Out) You

Pen Strokes Spilling Blood
On Pages That Are My Flesh
My Eyes Wide Open To Dreams
Where I Don't Sleep
Sleep Being The Thief
That Robs My Reality
Sadness Is The Blanket
Where I Make My Bed
Alone

Author notes

The first thing I've written in a very long time.

How can you be in a relationship with someone and still all alone

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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    This is a very thought provoking piece, Iguess if your not getting what you need to satisfy your soul then a relationship is very lonely. Your choice of words is superb, very emotinve.Thanks for a good read littlefishone


  • AlmostLover
    August 12, 2008
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    This is so great! Such emotion in such a short poem. Simply beautiful ♥