Love is patient,love is kind
And its not afraid to speak its mind
Love is harsh,love is cold
It does not do what it is told
Love is tender,love is sweet
So it makes you miss a heart beat
Love is once,love is true
Rarely leaving the lovers with a clue
Love is endeless,love is bright
That makes the lovers leap and take flight
Author notes
please comment and also if you can think of something else to add please say, its a work in progress
A contest entry
- Anything but gold... by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended October 3, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - RHYME AWAYY by TheSexyOne.
690 points, ended May 29, 47 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Beautiful poem about love
I liked it so much.Very fresh thought indeed.
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I don't know if you wanted to keep it going on the sad route,
if not, then maybe add something happy to it, like..
love is amazing, love is real, a beautiful emotion anyone can feel?
I don't know, that's just what popped into my mind. I did enjoy reading this though.
And I'm sure many can relate to this.
Keep on writing!
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SWEET
A very dainty piece, with a beautiful flow I will keep reading more of your material.You got your point across quickly and tastefuly.
WONDERFUL JOB
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From the heart and a soft expression of the attributes of love. Line 1 typo pateint -patient. Well written with a flow. Blessings.
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GREAT
Great rhyme! just the kind of poem I was looking for! thnx for entering -
you have penned a poem with a great rhyme scheme and fabulous insight
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This is so sweet and simple but so true. I applaud you. Best of luck to you in this contest poet.........
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So true, it's very beautiful!
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very nicely penned
you speak of truth here
very good
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Love the way you express yourself!!!
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It's very beautiful, i love the part
Love is harsh, love is cold
It does not do what it is told
on the sixth line, you could substitute "you" for "people" to get better rhythm.
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awww this is so beautiful, i love the flow, and meaning to it, great write and keep it up
take care, Stephanie ♥
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O wow!! This is so true with such a great rhyme!! WOOOOO! *screaming and wooping and hollaring*
WOOOO GIRL YOU ROCK! *applauding*
The rhyme and flow is just great!!!! Absoloutly great!! I AM STUNNED!! Its just so true! But with such a great rhyme!!
Great write! Loooove it!!!! omg! its so good with the rhyme too!!! OMG!!
*continues for like another 5 minutes*
Silverwolf
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thank u for your wow comment
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