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S&M Granny (Adults only)

She gets strapped to the table.
The sadist lifts her breast
"My word these are huge"
"Your mammaries are the best"

He binds her legs apart
She spits her teeth to the floor
He lubes up her behind
"My god you're such a whore"

He takes a large dildo
In her ass it snugly slides
Next some metal clips
To hold her cunt wide

Now he gets a board
And smacks her ass quite red
Than he rotates her body
So his dick reaches her head.

The oral sex slurping
The only noise to hear
As the man is sucked by woman
Despite their many years

Her breasts now hang a foot
Or more below her chest
He groans, he moans, he grabs her head
"Fucking suck me Elizabeth"

In the noise and ecstasy, at bliss
Unaware of the outside
So when playdome den opens
They don't hear surprised cries

"Granny" the child screams aloud
"Dad!" the adult yells stern
"Gramps" the innocent child searches
'slurp slurp' the answer returned

Author notes

It should go on the record that this is under the "makes me puke" section.

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  • City-of-Angels
    August 12, 2008

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    WOW...

    I think I'm scarred for life..lmfao
    "Her breasts now hang a foot
    Or more below her chest
    He groans, he moans, he grabs her head
    "Fucking suck me Elizabeth"

    ^ you should have seen the look on my face when i read that stanza
    Good luck in the contest!


  • etoile
    August 12, 2008

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    ahaaaa i laughed so hard at the last stanza
    this is one of the worst most disgusting things ive ever read

    goodluck in the contest!!!


    • jgrayson-au
      August 12, 2008
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      You laughed? No you completely missed the point. This was an exposition of the inter-relational connections between the ying of man and the yang of modern woman....

      Yeah no I'm just bullshitting. Good to see you laughed, that's precisely the intent. (maybe a little laugh, followed by a good shower and a G rated film to 'cleanse the mind')


  • Annexed Josephine
    August 12, 2008
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    THANK YOU. Finally. I should have just came out and asked.

    • jgrayson-au
      August 12, 2008
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      Eh? If you wanted us to write specifically about grannys having sex you just could have asked for sure. I really have no morals when it comes to...... anything.


  • Nogod
    August 12, 2008
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    Interesting, sounds like a regular Friday night at our place.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    Erm, adult and weird yes, erotic most definitely not. NB your/you're. Apart from that, I'm speechless!

    • jgrayson-au
      August 12, 2008
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      I'm always screwing up your you're... and think/thing for some weird reason.
      Thanks for the heads up will correct.

      • Yvette Champ gold member
        August 12, 2008
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        Thankyou for accepting the spirit of my non-alcoholic comment, as for making mistakes, gadzooks I'm always making them, without intent, and am always glad to be given the heads-up, so I am delighted that you didn't mind either


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    I can see where this is seen
    and yes to me it is bad poetry.

    under what makes one puke...
    best of luck to you with
    this in your contest you have it listed.


  • solzhenitsyn08
    August 12, 2008

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    prof. mes/rectifies/yer verse

    She gets the COCK to bite.
    And the innocent organ cecedes
    My word: This was rudimented, geez"
    "Her mammaries are poweful than that"

    • jgrayson-au
      August 12, 2008
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      The translation on Profmes' comment is currently under way. We will inform all parties when completed. Please wait here. We hope you enjoy some mood music to pass the time.


      "Do do do... do do DO do do dooo. Do... do do... do do do do DO do"

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