seek
mem'ry
for echo of
love's laughing artful breeze,
branched fences hide shattered mirror
broken truths stay un-mended caught up like
shadowed pictures weeping sadly
keeping small hope alive
re-kindle joy
try to
seek
A contest entry
- Rictameter Word Bank by piccola.
900 points, ended August 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
wishes
though in the search for love we so often find pain and shame instead. But the need to be loved is great and we continue on into the abyss. good write poet.
-
Just love this. Wonderful words and the form is pretty.
-
Beautiful form that, I'll agree with Piccola here, looks better center-aligned. I love your use of 'mem'ry' in the second line.
Beautiful write; thank you for sharing with the group.
~Cassie
-
I've read the rict and it is lovely. Could you please center align though so I can see the form. Please? thank you for entering
Adding your comment:
