stress me, mess me,
tell me you're true,
burn me, yearn me
eat me i'm through.
kiss me and hug me
Leave me alone,
bleed me and skin me
right to the bone.
Author notes
inspired by http://allpoetry.com/poem/4501266# 'I feel so down' by http://allpoetry.com/Drowned%20In%20Ashes Poet Drowned In Ashes
Comments
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the "normal" dual cycle of love/hate...but why?
Love it seems fleeting
when not all is meeting
that vision that lies in the head
Passion seems failing
can really be jailing
depending if heart or head lead
Feelings are changing
denial arranging
the truth that are eyes do behold
The other be leaving
if you are deceiving
or try in the end just to mold
Have a great week bro...
Eddy
"right (down) to the bone"
Not only adds "depth" of thought
but also "state of mind" or mood
don't yah think...


