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Consumation

stress me, mess me,
tell me you're true,
burn me, yearn me
eat me i'm through.

kiss me and hug me
Leave me alone,
bleed me and skin me
right to the bone.

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inspired by http://allpoetry.com/poem/4501266# 'I feel so down' by http://allpoetry.com/Drowned%20In%20Ashes Poet Drowned In Ashes

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  • Just4u
    August 13, 2008

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    the "normal" dual cycle of love/hate...but why?


    Love it seems fleeting
    when not all is meeting
    that vision that lies in the head

    Passion seems failing
    can really be jailing
    depending if heart or head lead

    Feelings are changing
    denial arranging
    the truth that are eyes do behold

    The other be leaving
    if you are deceiving
    or try in the end just to mold


    Have a great week bro...

    Eddy

    "right (down) to the bone"

    Not only adds "depth" of thought
    but also "state of mind" or mood
    don't yah think...