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u c Thiis po3m do3s hav3 no TiitLe
cuzz ii cuudnT Thiink of 1
so u goTTa LiiVe WiTh iiT Th3 wayy iiT iis
r33Lii r33Lii bad iiT iiS
ii KNOW
ii goTTa stoP wriiTiinG now
tHiiS pOeM maKes meee SiiCK!

WHAT ELSE TO WRiiTE?
WHAT ELSE TO SAii?
ii JUST donT know!
iiVE WRiiTTen eNougH lAmE PoeTrii for todAii!!





Now in English:

You see, this poem does have no title,
'cause I couldn't think of one.
SO you gotta live with it the way it is.
Really, really bad it is,
I know.
I gotta stop writing now,
This poem makes me sick!

What else to write?
Wha else to say?
I just don't know,
I've written enough lame poetry for today!

A contest entry

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  • Melodies
    September 25, 2008

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    An ADORABLE poem, just the way I like them. I didn't need the translation because this poem is perfectly easy to read if you have an eye for it. lol SUCH FUN!


    • LittleAnn
      September 25, 2008
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      lol, thanks
      i've had writer's block for over a month now, and i have to write a creative letter-thingy for history class. imagine that!


  • Slick99
    August 19, 2008

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    hard poem

    wow this is kinda of a hard poem to read... lol. but at least you put it in english!!! good luck in the contest!!! -slick99


  • Annexed Josephine
    August 18, 2008
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    The shit. In a bad way.

    Great job.


  • etoile
    August 12, 2008

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    i HATE it when ppl use numbers instead of letters
    so this was def a good poem for this contest hahaaa
    LOL i loved the translation at the end
    goodluck!!

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