Ready for a tea party of dramatic proportions;;
running while dressing && laughing while crying.
All for you,
my baby boy.
Author notes
Tuesday.
Tea party themed birthday party.
writing this as I'm leaving. I might edit....
sorry.
A contest entry
- Are you up for a challenge? by innocence jaded.xx.
4200 points, ended September 8, 2008, 72 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I loved this poems shortness, it says a lot in the few lines in uses. It is a wonderful way of showing what we do for those we love. I loved the second line, both of the images you create are wonderful and filled me with a lot of feelings.
Really Great Work x -
I like this =) It's short & simple yet holds so much to it. I don't see why it would need to be edited
It's beautiful just as it is now. But if you do, feel free to message & tell me about it. & just a question, you have two of the same poem in this contest, & I was just guessing this was the one you wanted to use? haha just thought I'd tell you that =) Thanks for entering & good luck ! Keep it up! ♥
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