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Soap Opera(Slam Hits) (Adult content)

The Queen trembled as she invigorates the passion entrance liar.
Stands her ground from the melt of enemy battered ram slides  
Sticky option droppings flowing to her feet as homage decreed
Shaken by the obsession hits kicks, fried peanuts forced to flee.

Never venture again lacking encompassed body guard slaves
Deflated the escort walked away glorifying her fascination gall.
What crafty ways, could they have stumped out our prize share
I looked to mistress beauty in the reflections of her glory bursts
Singular she endured muffled, suffered the multi pronged blasts

 

The hellcat all pissed out in her lust and devilry say not grilled.
Wonders at this exploited rubbed passions promise one to all
Coolly beats my heart for this one’s mingled love form: exits tall
Not knowing truth of her lovers real liquidated credit lost call.
In silks on the shoulders gown docked moves the carriage yore.

 

 

Attention all her excellence enters the lair fort ‘Sentries salute’.

 

 

Ceremony slaves bow; nature you oaf, straighten up Master arrives!
The court attendant runs holding his cap by his left hand in anxiety.
Empress in anger jabs, hits nature for his inaptness: collar him tonight.
Hands pass the chain locks, I walk legs tremble the stairs limp away.

Darkness grows, above arches crawl with shadows, forced I follow.
Muscles bulge as I tip toe like a captured cat tortured sinews crawl.
Anxiety holds me taut in virgin grips, ply deflowered in masters wish.
The midnight guard chamber burns light as I am lead by the jab-stick.

Clap-clap dismiss: I run wild, heave, struck; end up on my knees.
Exits locked she pulls my chain to release and the whip speaks.
It cracks again and again I look up see my mistress smile, wink.
Lady lays her trap, puts out her hand alluring me to her touch-lick.

Throws the leather whip away, coaxes tease sucks my fingers wet
Dazed by her friendly acts I feel the love-craving to rub warm lips.
Unintended I look into her black eyes as her free hand controls me.
Eyes widen and I see the beauty face as it hurls me into her joys.

Warmth as it spreads down my spine, quivers at the base soaking.
Poky hand steal my body in magic, to crumble to her covet whim
Soft fingers play as they slide over my gifted swell in body mode.
Slanderous they move over my chest striking the nipples sore.

Freeing my neck strap her hands reach down to pull at string.
My loins and hers in liberty sizzle groan; her fingers crawl, grip.
Dowel puffs first meet, she folds back covers, in silence I squeal
The rude private growls shedding crocodile tears oiled in smooth.

On toes reaching over mane hold hands locked firm together.
Standing firm I let my arms party her thighs above the hips,
Positioned her bush begins to fire stride, guzzles to a bliss ride.
Legs entwine encircle the hip clefts scandalize the pole in slips.

Cords unknotted her breast plate slips to the ground, clatters.
Hardened moulds press piercing nipples to the chest, we kiss.
In arms her body shivers quivers on the bed cushions as we fall.
Whimper my elbows in lock; both knees high spread eagled call.

The bulkhead cautioned; bears the load as walls resist and open.
Skid-rammed the castle doors yield in heat as battle weighs down.
Raptures pierce to follow moans cries clustered together as one.
The castle bustles again the victor charges, diffuses all resistance.

In sweetness passions promise tastes her fury at love submissions
Snuggles within each bounce, taken crushed, against the mash hilt
Umpire’s music to the craving of slave lovers, taking her rightful ride
Mused, as the poets boldly present the Soap Opera in tuned action:




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When in Rome do as Rome does.
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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 31, 2008
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    LAMO well indeed my dear wonderfully penned.

    best of luck

    tory


  • KytKitsune
    August 28, 2008

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    This is great! Amazing take on the prompt, and what what a way to make it amazing! This is exactly what I was looking for.

    Keep on Writing the good Write!

    ~~PanoCatt~~

  • broken spirits
    August 22, 2008
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    OK, nicely done, I am thinking this must have been quite difficult, splendid job.

    every girl should have her very
    own slave, sex~~~slave, that is.
    rissa,


  • apples fell
    August 20, 2008

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    "Freeing my neck strap her hands reach down to pull at string.
    My loins and hers in liberty sizzle groan; her fingers crawl, grip.
    Dowel puffs first meet, she folds back covers, in silence I squeal
    The rude private growls shedding crocodile tears oiled in smooth."

    - That was just an excellent stanza and I like how you played around with word use here. The whole piece has a very adult tone, but it feels like it is to help add to the poetry, not take away from it. You have a lot here to digest and it can be overwhelming if you don't slow down and read each line...So I did just that. I read the poem over a few reads and I think it's the impact and the tone of the piece as one of truth, reason and yes, lust. I liked the internal rhymes the piece carried and how you matched up poetic intent to a very vocal outlook, which feels almost as if it is being squeezed out of the very fabric of words themselves. I think how you have ended each line with a word that incorporates the imagery, but doesn't strain it, was a refreshing choice. Your work is always so thought out Jai and I am very happy you took the chance to enter this contest. A lot of this is just wonderful and if I was to pick my favorite part, it would be most of the poem. Yes, this is quite good and I think it will do well in the contest.

    Thanks so much for entering and good luck.

    ;


  • Solidified
    August 20, 2008

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    Wow this is truly creative, and in a different style than I've seen a lot of recently. Put together well and very entertaining. Thanks for entering.

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