Mirror
staring at me
shadow teasing slyly
image echoing yesterdays
inner terrains shattered in moon's rise,
fixated contour perfect masque
graduated smile slides
camouflage from
mirror.
Author notes
Mirror, echo, shadow,shatter---words utilized from word bank!
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A contest entry
- Rictameter Word Bank by piccola.
900 points, ended August 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a nice rict as to the form. Tha imagery is beautiful and I can see it in mind. The background is awsome as well. thank you for the entry
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Great use of the bank, a great piece!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful form and write. Love the background too.
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Thank you so much!
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nice poem within limitations of word bank Sister
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Thank you very much!
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Your poem and yoour background both have such a calm-ness
You just want to sit and relax as the world moves on....mac
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Sometimes....
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Very well done, best wishes in the contest.
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Thanks a lot!
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Wonderful
Lovely rictameter and great usage of the word bank as well. Very well penned!
Wish you the best in the contest.
Take care
David
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Thank you so much!
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