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For my friends that inspire!

I,
  I think, of you from time 2 time.
I,
  I think that you are special.
Like,
  the pretty flower I would pick...
                          to smell,
and
    have charish life.
I,
  I think, of you, think that...
                  you are special
                  like a dream
          on a cloudy fall day;
        with the sweet autume air.
I,
  I think...
    That I know
      that I love
        Love everything...
          about you! <3

what did you first think, how did it make you feel, whats with the name?

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  • aanika
    August 12, 2008

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    I,
    I think, of you from time 2 time.

    I think that would be stronger if you replaced '2' with 'to'.


  • amanda vampiress
    August 12, 2008
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    I feel the title goes with the poem somewhat, but then again, everyone has a different perspective of a poem when they read it. I liked your poem, though the stanzas was different it was still interesting. As far as the poem, your words were beautiful. keep up the good work!