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Lost Soul...

Freedom
A word to describe bachelorhood
Men are truly ignorant

But free I still am
Free to search myself
For the answers I seek

Two plus two once equaled four
Before I feared being loved
Disturbing the universe I live in

So I try to find the right answer
In hopes to make things right again
But still my equation equals “five”


Life Unknown
Alexander

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  • Blooming Poet
    September 1, 2008

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    interesting inn a good way. thats not normally something you hear from a guy, but I admire your honesty displayed here

  • Bekabulwinkle
    August 12, 2008

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    well done

    at fist i skimed this, but then went back and read it over and over and with every pass t grew, emotions seemed to deepen and i could feel the undercurrents in each word.
    fears of being caged, of never becomig what you want

    well done, honest and a little heartbreaking

    beka