The dragon dreams;
submerged beneath cerulean petals
koi dance through streams
mimicking the colored leave of falls
blossoming gardens
wade on tranquil waters
like liquid mirror’s
reflecting beauty’s absolution
as petals drift far into eternity
away from paradise…
Author notes
1. Sipping Sorrow's Cider
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended August 13, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A "brilliant poem" and a powerful visual
that you have created for the prompt !
Best regards ! Friend Easy
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love the background - love the way the visual of your words really stood out in this short but well presented please - keep it up bro ~ Mykeeee
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talk about imagery...outstanding! talent talent talent my friend. much love and respect
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Wow gold must have been phenomenal. I love 'like liquid mirrors reflecting beauty's absolution. Very well written and love the picture.
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i like it lol
liquid mirrors reflectin beauty's absolution. lol i like dat one
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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nice take on the prompt . . shows beauty . . liked "wade on tranquil waters" and "reflecting beauty's absolution" . . good luck in the contest
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