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A Hope's Flame

It is a literary den
where you can
find a friend
to treat you like family.

Have your words
be appreciated and read
until you can feel alive in your pen,
wounds of past disappointment
eased in their importance.

Able to discover
the world where
somebody cares what you right.

It can restore hope and give a smile,
to hear words the flow over your mind as honey.

Learn so many thoughts
that inspiration stirred by prompts.
What we find is a garment
missing in life.
Voices to tell us our heats are gems.

Being a treasure chest filled as we chose,
hopefully with golden memories
that never stop making
our reality
other than just existence.

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    Oh My~

    Keep that quill dancing and Love the lines:
    It can restore hope and give a smile,
    to hear words the flow over your mind as honey.
    Excellent take on the prompt!!
    Sweeter than Honey- Honey

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love & Light~ Desire~*~


  • SmartBrick
    August 12, 2008

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    Wow!I most definitely won't eat your pants or cut off all your hair at 12 am! Great write and great luck!


  • Miss Chievous
    August 12, 2008
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    Awesome!!!!!!!!
    I liked the last stanza the most!
    Good Luck!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    Excellent Entry!

    You always poetry brother!
    Thanks for sharing, peace!

    Bro Timothy


  • Topaze gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    Very well done indeed, a fine entry, my best wishes always.

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