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Saucy

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Not only neat
melding surf’s stuff
awash with hard pack
sucking energy
short of pounding…
there’s sauce to spare

Author notes

Think beyond the present when you witness unbridled beatiful people. They too deserve your admiration and pleasure!

Peace my friends...
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A contest entry

Why are youth and beautiful things old men write about?

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Thank you for your words, yes, they made me smile, which is what this contest was about
    Thanks to Jade for running this contest, it worked.

    Love
    Sue

    • Bjarne gold member
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thanks for taking time to comment, I am pleased that you smiled my way!
      bj


  • malmadre gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    Old men have seen lots of beautiful things and so their views of such things carry weight. This is heavy on the sauce.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    So True!

    Your words are always the ultimate in originality! And your AN's make me stop and think always! Best of luck in the contest...nice to see you.


    Az


  • solitaire
    August 12, 2008

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    insightful

    Refreshingly compact write. Like the lyrical high energy feel from the well-selected words. A natural high!

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