ur Hot
im not
then we faught
i won
ur dumb
kiss my bumb
i slit your neck
gave you a peck
killed u last night
took a bite
u tasted so good
u gave me wood
u died
i lied
left u in the gutter
next to my brother
u got blood on me
then i had to pee
i went inside
after u died
watched a show
called my hoe
went to bed
knowing u were dead
when i woke
i was broke
your ghost must have took my money
it wasnt funny
so then i cried
killed myslf and died
Author notes
This is the best poem i've ever wrote 
A contest entry
- Bully by Annexed Josephine.
500 points, ended August 25, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW
This is funny I was in the library reading it and was laughing loudly may I mention. this poem is really good I think that you have a great sense of poetic humor -
omfg thats so funny..i was reading it in class and burst out laughing haha
keep writing
<3
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hmm this was really good and quite neat i reckon
i enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work
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hahaha
this was actually a really good bad poem :|
lol that makes no sense whatsoever..
but i liked it! goodluck in the contest
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And I don't know what to comment, how often does that seriously happen? Great write though, made a lot of sense even though you tried to make it bad I'm guessing.
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yeah i did try to make it bad
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ummmmm 
lol
xoxo- christina
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This is not crap, this sounds very much like your fears of a love one, and I'm sure, one which will turn out ok,
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well done
did you a grudge against any male member -
"so then i cried
killed myslf and died"
I love these two lines, this is hilarious, love it!
Annie
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We're all having fun. Be confident. Say this is the best. Then I'll be the one to say "This is more crap".
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haha great ending.
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you should enter this stupid contest its kinda fun thanks for the comment
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I did :]. I'm the "is there a remen" entry.
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