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lavender lullabies

As I walk through the garden the fragrant scent of lavender fills my lungs
Calming, peaceful...even more so when Im with you
I remember that night, you sang me a lavender lullaby
The soft flower traced my every curve
My toes curled and back arched with each stroke
Purple passion in the sheets
Sweat mixed with sweet bliss- aromatherapy
Relaxing in your arms
Awake to find...youre gone
Left in my bed is a lavender lullaby

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  • catalyst.
    October 8, 2008
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    I loved the ending.


  • Justmenow
    September 10, 2008

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    another amazing piece, i love the romance of this poem and the feeling of adoration that is strongly conveyed, well done and i also lavendar so all good really

    x


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    September 1, 2008

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    WOW! This is so romantic. Absolutely enjoyed this poem. Beautiful choice of words. I love lavender colour a lot. Got a whole room of my home painted in this hue yesterday!

    Love,
    Charishma


    • Lonely Christina
      September 1, 2008
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      aww thanks! i love lavender too wow thts awsum, my bathroom at my house is this color as well.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 21, 2008

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    awww very delicate and peaceful. I do love lavender. The colour, the scent, the flowerbuds. You make me inhale it all for free, a wonderful thing!


  • Lislaine
    August 13, 2008

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    Aww.. so sweet i totally adore this one...


  • EasytoForget
    August 11, 2008
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    I wish I could have this read to me when I go to sleep every night, very lovely...


  • peridotPixi
    August 11, 2008

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    this is really cute, i like how the flower traced your body, oh yeah you might want to lighten up the text just a little it was hard for me to see, i dont know maybe im going blind, good luck in the contest keep up the writing, ~your wifey Amy

  • EmoBunny
    August 11, 2008
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    loved it OMG i love all of ur writings lol

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