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Hindsight

Janus
What do you seek
With your double vision?
Memories echo from the past...
Loud enough to shatter glass except a
Mirror also called the future...
Unless it's already
Broken... is it?
Janus?

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Seek, memories, echo, shatter, mirror, broken

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  • piccola silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    nice job on the rict. It's shape is just a tad off so if you could find a word with perhaps one more letter without changing the syllable count then the form would take it's perfect shape. thank you for entering