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is there a remen

govting afrika
with apples
is l1ke 3ating
sour lem0ns
without lemony taste
and with0ut
something 3ls3 that makes sense and that som3 how relates to africa metaphorically

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It's hard to write bad poetry without spelling every other word wrong .

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  • Desire gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    OMG~

    Now considering what the prompt called for-
    Yep~~ You sure did bring forth a doozy
    Hostess wanted bad-
    was this one painful to write
    My eyes crossed and I took pain reliever
    but have to say~
    this was quite Creative-

    Loved it!!!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Humor and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • etoile
    August 12, 2008
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    i like the use of numbers
    it annoyed me like hell!
    goodluck in the contest!


  • LittleAnn
    August 12, 2008

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    I have no clue what you're saying here, so this has to be the perfect entry for this contest!

    Annie


  • peridotPixi
    August 12, 2008

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    this is cool, i didnt get it, but maybe i wasnt a post to?? anyways good luck in the contest, and keep up the better writing, ~Amy


  • Annexed Josephine
    August 11, 2008
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    This is by far, the best entry I've gotten. Thanks.


  • Jasmine Rayne
    August 11, 2008

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    lmfao I can't breathe. This is too terrible and hilarious at the same time ahahahaha >.< I hope you win!

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